Avakai Biryani - in 15 minutes

From the COFM brand, Anish made his pet project Avakai Biryani.. which is supposed to be a feel good film like that of other shekharji's projects. Here are my honest opinions after watching the movie in terms of script writing and other aspects. Though i consider him as a mentor for taking the screen writing and script writing as passion, i as a small and normal audience write my views on Avakai Biryani.

1. Half of the story is told, when the titles are completed
2. In first 15 minutes, after characters are introduced you come to know what is the ending.
3. Connecting scenes are more than the major scenes, which brings a feel of serial or episode you are watching on a stage or on some TV.
4. second half does not link anything with the first half, unless we are nearing to the climax
5. Comedy was natural, but the expressions were not so lively from the characters especially heroine..
6. Stage 1 told almost everything about the movie, by which stage 2 and 3 though visually appealing, it was not gripping.
7. Editing by Praveen, probably i expected more after watching COFM. He would have advised Anish because he is the right person, but he might be in a technical nostalgia seeing the color mixings and others.
   Good thing about the script
   The Stage 2 of the script was very well prepared, which is usually considered as the toughest part for script writing. (stage 2: just before the interval), it started early though. If this was continued for some more time, it probably would have appealed to a different set of audience.
   Songs are very well placed, written, picturised and brought life into the movie.
   What would have been better
   The water episode, might be given some strength in the second half so that audience can connect to it.
   Hotel episode is dragged a lot in the 2nd half, it would have been in the edited scenes, so that when there is nothing being told at the end of the scene, there is no need of prolonging that scene for so long.

Though i have seen the script being something more in size than the Eamcet Textbooks, Now i am like curious what was written in such a large book.
Anish and Team: Keep up the good work, and have the tempo, dont wait for box office to respond. Movie is a passion and not a mission for commercial success. Though we agree that it is required, but as you always say " I am what my mind is all about, rest all is fake" just believe in it.
Pradeep
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